[leeloo]

No more tears
I feel no pain
Tear of my dress
Look at me
Put your weapons down
Who is normal?
Nothing to keep
Nothing to save
I stay naked
Nothing to hide
I'm not bitter
I'm not afraid
You're embarrassed
Look in my eyes
Look at your face
I was drowning
Now, I feel so light
I see so clear
I breathe again
No more feelings
Poisoning my skin
I don't care about our wrongs
Let's write poems
Invent new lines
And this dead love
Will rest in peace

[Phenixa]

This was an awesome poem about a death love I think ? Something is really nice with poems, there is always something hide, something that we don't understand and that we can imagine, believe.

I really like the turning of your sentences and it's a nice subject to write about.

[Poetrygal]

Howdy,

I liked it, simple and direct. One comment I have is, if this is for an American audience, 'no more tears' is a slogan for a famous baby shampoo. Might I suggest 'my tears are lost'? Also I'd add stanza breaks or some other form of breaking. You normally want pauses to allow the reader to absorb or breathe with this kind of poem. You can indent or uses dashes, if you like. Very clean piece. I like the sight rhyme of tears and tear, it works.

Hope this helps, happy writing!