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FADE IN

   on the words CZECH AIRLINE.  We are panning across the words
   on the side of the plane.

   INT. AIRPLANE

   ANGLE DOWN

   on a tray table.  Crumpled Czech bills and coins are on it.
   Hands are counting the money.  The airline hostess announces
   the arrival at JFK - in CZECH.  A hand reaches into a breast
   pocket - pulling out two passports.  One is opened.  Belongs
   to EMIL SLOVAK.  The next passport belongs to OLEG RAZGUL.
   The hand passes the Oleg Razgul passport to the man next to
   him.  We notice several empty airline bottles of vodka and a
   small disposable camera on Oleg's tray table.  The passport
   is set down.  Oleg picks it up.  We hear Emil's voice in
   CZECH.  The scene is subtitled in ENGLISH.

            EMIL (V.O.)
      Just do what I do.  Say the same thing I
      say.  Don't open your mouth.

            OLEG (V.O.)
      Okay.

   INT. PASSPORT CONTROL - KENNEDY AIRPORT - DAY

   CAMERA DOLLIES down a long line of passengers.  They are
   split into two lines - one for Americans, the other for
   visitors.  CAMERA finally arrives at EMIL SLOVAK.  An
   unshaven Czech in his mid-30's.  Tall, scraggly beard.
   Piercing blue eyes.  He's dressed in an outdated suit.  His
   eyes are alert, cunning and smart.

   OLEG RAZGUL, stands in line behind Emil.  Oleg is big.  Not
   tall - but wide.  A wrestler's body.  Emil looks at Oleg.
   (The following is in CZECH and subtitled in ENGLISH.)

            EMIL
      Don't fool around.

            OLEG
      Okay.

   Oleg holds up his disposable camera - at arms length - to
   take a picture of himself.

            EMIL
      Did you hear what I said?

            OLEG
      I want to document my trip to America.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      Next.
         (Emil steps up)
      Could I see your documents, please?

            EMIL
      Yes sir.

   He hands the passport to the officer who runs it through an
   image swipe.  Emil glances furtively back to Oleg.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      What is your intended purpose of your
      visit to the United States?

            EMIL
      Two weeks holiday.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      How much money are you carrying with
      you?

            EMIL
      I have five-hundred dollars.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      Can you show me?  Sir, no cameras in the
      FIS area!

   Oleg was about to take a picture of Emil and the Immigration
   Officer.  Oleg puts the camera away.  Smiles sheepishly.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER (CONT'D)
         (to Emil)
      Is he with you?  Are you travelling
      together?

            EMIL
      Yes.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      Please join us.
         (to Oleg)
      Come on forward.

            EMIL
      Is there a problem?

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      No, you're travelling together.  I want
      to talk to you together.  Hi, how are
      you?  Can I take a look at your
      documents?
         (takes Oleg's passport)
      Are you related?

            OLEG
      Yes...he's my friend.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      Okay.  You're a Czech national and
      you're a Russian national.  How do you
      know one another?

   Oleg starts to speak, but Emil cuts him off.

            EMIL
      We are both from Prague.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
         (to Oleg)
      How long are you planning to stay?

            EMIL
      Two weeks.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      I'd like to speak for himself, okay?

            EMIL
      He doesn't speak English.

            OLEG
      I speak English.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
         (to Oleg)
      Then answer my questions.  Where were
      you planning to stay during the two
      weeks that you're here?

            OLEG
      New York.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      Yes, we're in New York now.  But where
      are you planning to stay in New York?

            OLEG
      A cheap hotel.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      What are you coming here to do?

            OLEG
      I'm here for movies.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      Movies...to be in the movies or to see
      movies?

            OLEG
      Yes.  No.  Both.  When I was a boy, I
      see movie at school called "It's a
      Wonderful Life" directed by Frank Capra.
      Ever since I want to come to America.
      Land of the free.  Home of the brave.  A
      land where anyone can be anything. As
      long as they are white.

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      Excuse me?

            EMIL
      He made joke, bad joke.  First time on
      airplane...

   The SUPERVISOR comes over to see what the problem is:

            IMMIGRATION OFFICER
      Well, they've got valid visas, but they
      don't have much money.  Uh... and I'm
      not...uh, I think there's a possibility
      they may be coming to live and reside.

            SUPERVISOR
      Look how long the line is.  We gotta
      move 'em out.  I'll take them down to
      secondary.

   Emil looks at Oleg, pissed.

   INT. P.B. HERMAN'S RESTAURANT - DAY

   The place is empty except for one table at the end of the
   bar.  EDDIE FLEMMING, Manhattan's most famous detective, and
   his savvy, black partner, LEON JACKSON are having cocktails.
   Eddie is smoothly handsome, tough, smart and tired.  Not only
   is he the best homicide detective Manhattan has ever seen,
   he's continually mentioned in New York columns and has been
   the subject of several magazine articles.  There's even been
   a TV movie about one of his biggest cases.  Leon has been
   with Eddie a long time and was also featured in the TV movie.

   Sitting with Eddie and Leon is ROBERT HAWKINS, host and star
   reporter for the tabloid show, "Top Story."  Hawkins is also
   the best in the business and has dealt with them all: Joey
   Buttafuco and Amy Fisher, Lorena Bobbit and OJ.

   Wait staff bustles in the b.g. doing the morning set up.
   Hawkins listens as Eddie, cigar in hand, finishes a "war
   story" and a vodka tonic at the same time.

            EDDIE
      So we're waitin' to hit this warrant -
      we got Emergency Service with the heavy
      weapons standin' by - ready to go.  I
      say, lemme get a cigar outta the car.  I
      go to get the cigar and BOOM!  All the
      sudden I turn around and a kid with a
      shotgun let one go.  Right where I was
      standin'.  That coulda been it.  I
      coulda had my head blown off and for
      what?  Some stupid kid got panicky,
      takes the safety off and it's over.  If
      I hadn't gone back for that cigar - for
      a bad habit - I would've had my head
      blown off.

            HAWKINS
      Jesus Christ.

   PAULIE, the owner, walks up.

            PAULIE
      Speakin' of bad habits, everybody okay?

            HAWKINS
      Another martini.

            LEON
      Coffee for me, I gotta slow down.

            EDDIE
      Vodka tonic.

            LEON
         (rethinks it)
      Maybe you could just put in a shot of
      Martell?

   Paulie takes the drinks off the table and an empty bottle of
   vodka.

            LEON (CONT'D)
         (of Eddie's story)
      It was freaky, I'll tell you.  Stupid
      kid.

            EDDIE
      What's the kid gonna say - sorry?
      Meanwhile I'm not here anymore.
      Like last week - we were at the morgue
      and this guy was all chopped up - spleen
      here - liver there - his heart in a pan.
      Six hours ago this guy was walkin' his
      dog or buyin' a quart of milk.  Who
      knows?  But some kid's robbed him for $3
      or some shit and shot him and now you
      can't tell if he's a piece of beef or a
      human being and I'm thinkin' that's me.
      Sooner or later.  That's me. 

            HAWKINS
      Sooner or later that's everybody. 

            EDDIE
      Not chopped up.  Not chopped up like
      that.  I mean, what do I got left?
      Coupla articles.  A medal or two.
      Plaque here and there and in a coupla
      years no one remembers me anymore.

            HAWKINS
      I think you're getting a little moody
      there, Eddie.

            EDDIE
      I'm not moody.

   Hawkins and Leon share a look.

            HAWKINS
      Isn't he a little moody?

            LEON
      Of course he's moody.  He thinks he's in
      love.

            HAWKINS
      In love?  With who?

   Paulie delivers the drinks and sets some cigars on the table.
   Takes a seat next to Eddie.  Eddie asks Hawkins.

            EDDIE
      How old are your kids?

            HAWKINS
      My kids?  Let's see...Susan's 15.
      Aundrea's 9.  Don't tell me you're
      thinking about having a kid!  How old
      are you?  Never mind.
      Let me just tell you this: Every stupid
      cliche you hear about kids - they change
      your life, they make you a better
      person, they make you whole...
         (beat)
      It's all true!  Before I had kids when
      friends talked about their kids, I
      wanted to vomit.  Now -- I get it.  Am I
      right, Leon?

            LEON
      Absomotherfuckin'lutely.  You can have
      all three of my ex-wives.  But somebody
      so much as looks sideways at my four
      girls -- I'd kill 'em. 
         (takes out his wallet)
      You haven't seen my youngest have you?

   As he hands pictures to Hawkins his cell phone rings.

            LEON (CONT'D)
      Yeah?

            HAWKINS
      Paulie, you've got kids, right?

            PAULIE
      My kids don't talk to me anymore but
      they were great when they were young.

            LEON
         (into the phone)
      Sure it's him?  Great!
         (collapses the phone)
      Unique's home.

   They all rise from the table.

            EDDIE
      Paulie, I need the cure.

            PAULIE
      Step into my office.

   Leon and Hawkins sit back down as Eddie and Paulie leave.

            HAWKINS
      So you got your kids listening to Opera?
      You still singing in the church on the
      weekends?

   INT. SECONDARY IMMIGRATION OFFICE - DAY

   Now other officers are questioning Emil and Oleg.  They've
   been there a while.  The SECONDARY OFFICER is looking Oleg.

            SECONDARY OFFICER
      Okay.  You work in a vodka factory.  I
      understand that.
         (to Emil)
      And what kind of work do you do?

            EMIL
      I am butcher.

            SECONDARY OFFICER
      You're a butcher?  What do you use pig
      intestines for?

            EMIL
      You stuff sausage in it.

            SECONDARY OFFICER
      And what do you do with the bones?

            EMIL
      Dog food.

   Emil looks at Oleg.  Blaming his stupid responses at Passport
   Control for their detainment.

            SECONDARY OFFICER
      Are you married?

            EMIL
      No.  Are you proposing?

   ANGLE UP

   through a thousand ICE CUBES.  A face plunges towards us...

   INT. MENS ROOM

   Eddie has his back to us as he dunks his face into a sink
   full of ice.  He dries his face, looks into his bloodshot
   eyes.  Presents a small black ring box to the mirror.

            EDDIE
      Will you marry me?  Wanna get married?
      What are you doin' Saturday?

   Leon enters.  Eddie turns.

            EDDIE (CONT'D)
      I'm gonna propose.

            LEON
      When?

            EDDIE
      Tomorrow.  At lunch.

            LEON
      You ready?

   Eddie leans back and drops some Visine in his eyes.  Turns.

            EDDIE
      The thrill of the hunt.  I love it.

   EXT. TIMES SQUARE - DAY

   Oleg and Emil stare at the bright lights - all the nonstop
   action.  Each stands with an old suitcase.

            OLEG
         (in Russian)
      Look.  Times Square.  Just like in the
      movies!

            EMIL
         (in Czech)
      Don't speak Russian!

            OLEG
         (in Russian)
      Why?  Why do I always have to speak to
      you in Czech?

            EMIL
         (in Czech)
      Because I don't like your ugly language.
      I heard enough of it in school!  Now
      speak Czech or English.  And don't fool
      around anymore.  You almost got us
      thrown out!

   Emil pulls out an envelope with Milos' address on it.  This
   is who they came to see.  Emil hails a CAB.  Oleg is staring
   inside a camera store - at himself on a monitor.  A
   videocamera's pointed out in the street.

            OLEG
      Look.  New videocameras.  Color
      viewfinder.  Image stabilization.
      Solarization.  Night vision.

            EMIL
      We have no money.  Come on.

   Oleg stares at the videocamera - dying to have one like this.
   Emil slides into the cab.

            CABBIE
      Where you wanna go, buddy?

   Emil pulls out the post-marked envelope.  Points to the
   return address on it and passes it through the slot to the
   Cabbie.

            EMIL
      Here.

   Emil looks out the window - no sign of Oleg.  Then, Oleg
   hurries out the camera store, gripping something inside his
   coat.  He flings both suitcases in the trunk, SLAMS it shut
   and jumps in the back seat.  He opens his jacket - pulling
   out the VIDEOCAMERA he just stole.

            EMIL (CONT'D)
      Go!

   Oleg smiles sheepishly at Emil.
      

   EXT. SPANISH HARLEM - DAY

   Eddie's car pulls up.  Eddie, Leon and Hawkins get out.

            HAWKINS
      So what's unique?

            EDDIE
      Not what.  Who.

   Eddie passes Hawkins a Polaroid - of a woman on a bed -
   covered in blood.

            EDDIE (CONT'D)
      He's from Antigua.  His girlfriend was
      taking too long to put her make-up on.
      they were late for a party.  Stabbed her
      with a beer bottle.

            HAWKINS
      That's unique.

            EDDIE
      Yeah.  And he still went to the party.

   Leon moves to a LOOKOUT - gives him a twenty.

            LOOKOUT
      Top floor.  Back room.

            EDDIE
      Yeah.  I make big cases, they make the
      news and I look good.  But the problem
      with becoming a star is downtown.  They
      shoot at stars.  Now be quiet.  Shhh.

   As they reach the doorway - Eddie surprises two crackheads.
   Waves them off.  They hurry away.

            EDDIE (CONT'D)
      I hope this prick doesn't run.  My knees
      are killing me.  Stay behind me.

            HAWKINS
      You're worried for my safety.  I'm
      touched.

   Eddie flattens against the building - watches Unique descend
   the fire escape.

            HAWKINS (CONT'D)
      Ready?

            EDDIE
      Keep them out of my way.

            HAWKINS
      Okay.  You ready?

            EDDIE
      Yeah, yeah.  Jesus.

   Eddie closes in.

            HAWKINS
         (into his cell phone)
      COME ON!  COME ON!  YOU FUCKING GUYS,
      LET'S MOVE IT!

   Unique is climbing down the fire escape - before he gets to
   the bottom, Leon bursts through a door behind him and kicks
   the fire escape, sending Unique flying into the alley.  Where
   he lands dropping his gun.

   Eddie pulls him off the ground as Leon scoops the gun up.

            EDDIE
      What's your rush?  Going to a party?

            UNIQUE
      Why you chasin' me, man?

            EDDIE
      I don't know.  You always come outta
      your house that way?

            UNIQUE
      It's not my house, man.  I don't live
      here.

            EDDIE
      Well, sounds like burglary to me.

   Leon cuffs Unique who recognizes Eddie.

            UNIQUE
      I know you man.

   An unmarked van comes tearing into the scene.  Disgorges a
   mini-cam team that starts filming but they missed the bust.

            HAWKINS
         (to Eddie)
      Any chance we can do that again?

            EDDIE
      Again?  I didn't wanna do it the first
      time.
                  

   EXT. EAST SIDE - LATE DAY

   The cab is in front of an old five-story brownstone.  Oleg
   gets the bags out of the trunk as Emil tucks the envelope
   into his jacket, then steps up to the old building.  He looks
   back at Oleg - who's VIDEOTAPING him.

            EMIL
      Turn that off!  Get the bags.

            OLEG
      Why should I carry your bag?  I am not a
      dog.

            EMIL
      For five years I paid for your
      stupidness - you'll carry my bag for the
      rest of my life if I say so.
         (challenging)
      Unless you refuse, Oleg.

   Oleg looks at Emil.  Even though Oleg is stronger than Emil,
   he fears him.  He picks up both bags.  Emil searches the
   occupant list over the buzzers to the apartment building.

            EMIL (CONT'D)
      There.  5RW.

   Emil pushes ten of the buzzers except 5RW.  A BUZZER clicks
   and Emil pushes it open.

   INT. MILOS' APARTMENT BUILDING - STAIRWELL - DAY

   The brownstone has no elevator so Emil and Oleg climb the
   stairs... Oleg cradling his camera.  Emil notices a crack
   pipe on the floor and picks it up.  Smells the bowl.

            OLEG
      What?

            EMIL
      Smell like chemicals...for smoking
      drugs.

   Emil pockets the pipe and climbs to the top floor, moving
   down the dirty hallway to a corner door.

   INT. MILOS' APARTMENT BUILDING - HALLWAY - DAY

   He KNOCKS...FOOTSTEPS approach.  The door is opened by MILOS -
   a 40-year-old Czech, dressed in stained plumbers overalls.
   He  is surprised to see Emil and Oleg in his doorway.  Oleg
   films him...

            MILOS
      Emil???!

            EMIL
      Surprise!  Surprise!

   Milos shoots a look across the tiny kitchen to TAMINA, his
   comely wife.

   INT. MILOS' APARTMENT - CONTINUOUS

   Emil pushes his way inside.  Oleg follows.  Milos wears
   plumbers overalls but Emil notices sports a Rolex.  Tamina
   has on a faded dress but despite their cheaply furnished
   apartment she wears an expensive brushed gold necklace,
   bracelet and big pearl earrings.  The room is furnished with
   kitsch from Disney World and Las Vegas.  The only anomaly is
   a HUGE SONY TRINITRON HOME ENTERTAINMENT CENTER.  (The
   following is in Czech and subtitled in English.)

            EMIL
      Your sister said she didn't know where
      you were so you shouldn't write to her
      with return address if you're hiding.

            MILOS
      Did you hurt her?

            EMIL
      You know me...I never hurt anybody.
      Where's the money?

            OLEG
      Hello, Tamina.

   Oleg is looking Tamina over.  Milos - though scared - barks
   at Oleg.

            MILOS
      Take your eyes off her, Oleg!
         (to Emil)
      Look.  It wasn't my fault you two were
      caught.
         (of Oleg)
      It's his fault.  Trying to get the bank
      clerk's phone number?!  I wasn't going
      to wait!!!

            EMIL
      Milos.  Get my money!

   Oleg videotapes the scene.

   CLOSE ON AN AJAR DOOR

   All we see behind it is a WOMAN'S FACE and her wet hair - she
   obviously came from the shower and we see the towel wrapped
   around her.

            MILOS
         (nervously)
      We spent it!

            EMIL
      Ha. Ha.

            MILOS
      Look at the way we live.  I'm a plumber.
      You think I'd be working if I had
      money?!

   Emil, pissed, moves to a wood block and pulls out a KITCHEN
   KNIFE.  He grabs Tamina roughly, putting the blade to her
   throat.

            MILOS (CONT'D)
      Emil.  Put down the knife.

   Milos looks at his wife - who is terrified.

            MILOS (CONT'D)
      Emil.  I'll help you.

   Milos closes the gap between him and Emil - trying to calm
   him by talking softly.

            MILOS (CONT'D)
      I can get you a job.

            EMIL
      A job?

            MILOS
      Yes, the money is good.

            EMIL
      As a plumber?!

            MILOS
      It's easy to learn.

            EMIL
      A job??  As a plumber???  You think I
      come to America to work!

            MILOS
      We started over, you can too.

            EMIL
         (furious)
      You spent all the money while I was in
      prison?  Now you tell me to get a job
      fixing toilets?!?

   Emil pulls the knife away from Tamina - then angrily PLUNGES
   it toward Milos' chest!

   Oleg videotapes it.  Then lowers the camera - shocked that
   Emil killed Milos.

   Blood sprays Tamina's face.  She tries to run but Oleg grabs
   her, not noticing her brushed gold bracelet falls to the
   floor.  He covers her mouth as he points the videocamera at
   Emil who STABS Tamina - absolutely enraged!

   THE WOMAN BEHIND THE DOOR

   flees...Emil hears NOISE in the bedroom - a window opening.
   Emil kicks the bedroom door open.  Sees the window leading to
   the fire escape.  He dashes to it.  Sees four flights down -
   the WOMAN, wearing a summer dress.  Barefoot.  Her hair still
   wet. 

   She looks up.  She is beautiful and terrified.  She runs
   down the alley.

            EMIL (CONT'D)
      She saw!

   Emil hurries toward the bathroom.  She just got out of the
   shower.  Her underwear and purse are draped over a chair.
   Emil grabs the purse.  Finds a CZECHOSLOVAKIAN PASSPORT.  He
   opens the cover, stares at her photo and name.

            EMIL (CONT'D)
      Daphne Hanlova.

   There's one stamp in the passport - from the U.S. when she
   arrived - June 16, 1998.  Underneath is written - 6 MONTH
   STAY.  Emil flips through the rest of the passport - all
   blank pages.

            EMIL (CONT'D)
      Six month visa.  Still here two years
      later.  They'll deport her if she goes
      to Police.

   Emil pockets Daphne's passport and wallet, scoops up her
   shoes and jacket - enters the kitchen and dumps them on the
   floor.  He tears through the kitchen cabinets, throwing cans
   and bottles aside.

            OLEG
      What are you looking for?

   Emil finds nail polish remover - looks at the bodies.

            EMIL
      I'm going to make a bohemian barbecue.

   Emil draws the kitchen curtains plunging the room into
   darkness.
      
      EXT. CENTRAL PARK - NIGHT

   A face comes from the darkness.  It's an athletically
   handsome man, jogging out of a tunnel towards us.  He's in a
   tie and jacket in Central Park at NIGHT.
   He is JORDAN (JORDY) WARSAW.  A sensitive man of rugged
   honesty.  He runs down the hill in a hurry.  A MUGGER steps
   in his path.

            MUGGER
      Got any spare change?  How 'bout a spare
      twenty?

            JORDY
      Look, I don't have time for you, get out
      of my way!!

            MUGGER
      Alright, how 'bout all your fuckin'
      money?

   The Mugger pulls a knife - and in a whirl of movement, Jordy
   grabs his wrist and disarms him in a deadly, professional
   manner - hurling him down to the pavement, twisting his arm
   behind his back.  With his other hand, Jordy whips out a
   BROWNING 9MM from his shoulder holster and places it behind
   the mugger's head.  Jordy displays his shield.

            JORDY
      Okay, you're under arrest!  Now you
      happy?

            MUGGER
      Fire Department?  Firemen don't carry
      guns.

            JORDY
      Oh yeah?  Guess again.

   Jordy handcuffs the Mugger and searches the Mugger's coat
   pockets - pulling out a handful of driver's licenses and
   credit cards.

            JORDY (CONT'D)
      Nice - how many people you ripped off
      tonight?!  Get up!

   As Jordy yanks the Mugger to his feet, his BEEPER goes off.

            JORDY (CONT'D)
      You couldn't listen to me, could you?

   Jordy drags the Mugger to a tree.  Cuffs him so his face is
   pressed up against the bark.

            JORDY (CONT'D)
      I'll send a cop back for you.

            MUGGER
      Hey.  C'mon, you can't leave me like
      this.  Some freak'll come by and stab
      me!

   Jordy jogs off across the park.

            MUGGER (CONT'D)
      Wait!  Come back!!

   EXT. MILOS' APARTMENT - NIGHT

   FIRE TRUCKS from three battalions.  Radios CRACKLE.  There's
   a crowd growing.  Jordy pushes his way through.  The top
   floor of the brownstone where Milos and Tamina lived has been
   reduced to smoking ruins.  The trees are covered in debris
   and soot.  Jordy moves to LOUIE - Battalion Chief.

            LOUIE
      Lieutenant - take up your line and
      relieve Ladder Company 60 on the top
      floor.

            JORDY
      Hey, Louie, were you first due?

            LOUIE
      Yeah, I radioed you guys right away
      'cause you got two roasts on the top
      floor but you don't hafta investigate
      cause homicide is up there.

            JORDY
      Homicide?  Who let them up?  I didn't
      make it a crime scene yet.

            LOUIE
      Hey, it's Eddie Flemming.

            KORFIN (O.S.)
      Yo, Jordy!

   BOBBY KORFIN - an overweight arson investigator with a quick
   with and good sense of humor - comes over, pulling on a
   turnout coat.

            KORFIN (CONT'D)
      Where you been, man?  We got a
      celebrity!

            JORDY
      I heard.  Who the hell let them up
      there?

            KORFIN
      I don't know, you think Eddie will give
      me his autograph?

            JORDY
      You see anything in the crowd?  Anybody
      suspicious?

            KORFIN
      Naw - I'm sure the suspect's not here.

            JORDY
      Oh yeah, why?

            KORFIN
      'Cause Eddie woulda locked him up by
      now!

   INT. MILOS' APARTMENT - NIGHT

   The roof is gone.  The sky is exposed.  It's charred ruins,
   smoked beams and watery muck.  Eddie and Leon are standing by
   what's left of the mattress, looking at Milos and Tamina's
   charred bodies.  Eddie grips a half-smoked Cuban cigar,
   listening to Leon.

            LEON
      So, it looks to me - from the sixty-nine
      position - that they were doin' each
      other but were so whacked out of their
      heads they set the pipe on the mattress,
      lit it up, and they got fried.  What do
      you think, Eddie?

   Jordy enters - with Korfin who's carrying a paint can.

            EDDIE
      I don't know.  We got the experts here.
      Show them what you found - I hope you
      don't mind, we came over to see if we
      could help.

   Korfin makes a beeline for Eddie - wanting to meet the
   celebrity.

            KORFIN
      Nah, not at all.  Detective Flemming -
      Bobby Korfin.  My Uncle Tony worked with
      you at 2-1 back when you were a rookie.

            JORDY
      Could you put out the cigar?  Part of
      the job is picking up scents.

            EDDIE
      Oh, sure.

   Eddie puts his cigar out.  Carefully slides it into a cigar
   holder and pockets it to finish later.

            LEON
      Well, I found - check it out - crack
      pipe.  Looks like they got careless.

   Leon displays the pipe Emil found on the stairs.  Korfin
   shines the flashlight on Leon to look at the pipe.

            LEON (CONT'D)
      Mind not shining that light in my eyes?

            KORFIN
      Sorry, bro.

            JORDY
      Hey, that's great you guys got it all
      wrapped up, but you don't mind if we go
      through the routine?  It gives us
      somethin' to do.

            EDDIE
      No, we don't mind.  You mind Leon?

            LEON
      No.  Go ahead.

            JORDY
      Thanks.  Appreciate it.

   Jordy throws a look at Korfin.  Homicide detectives have no
   respect for fire marshals' investigative skills.  Eddie
   rummages through the apartment - moving into the kitchen and
   living room... Leon watches as Korfin sticks a pencil in a
   charred beam, measuring how deep in it goes.

            KORFIN
      Okay, Jordy - it was a fast fire, we got
      good patterns - about thirty minutes
      old.

   Jordy moves to one of the corpses.  He pulls on a white
   rubber glove.  Inserts his finger in the corpses mouth.  The
   glove comes out white.

            JORDY
      Mouth's clean, too.

            KORFIN
      Clean?

            JORDY
      Don't blow your nose!

   Jordy's looking at Leon, who was just about to blow his nose.

            JORDY (CONT'D)
      The smoke'll permeate your nostrils -
      burn 'em out.  Let it run.

            KORFIN
      But you knew that, right?

   Leon looks at Jordy, then lowers the handkerchief.  Jordy
   turns back to the corpses on the bed.  Eddie - in the other
   room - has found Tamina's brushed gold bracelet on the floor.

            JORDY
      So the way you see it, two crack heads
      burned themselves up?

            LEON
      That's what it looks like to me.

            JORDY
      And while they're burning up, they're
      still goin' down on each other?  You got
      to hand it to them.

            LEON
         (realizes he's wrong - blows it
          off)
      Yeah, well, some people got their
      priorities straight.

   Leon watches Jordy, quietly.  With a pair of tweezers, Jordy
   pulls a small unburned piece of cloth from behind one of the
   heads.  Korfin supplies the paint can.  Jordy drops the cloth
   inside.

            LEON (CONT'D)
      What was that?

            JORDY
      Evidence.  Of a homicide.

   That got Eddie's attention and he comes back to the bedroom.

            JORDY (CONT'D)
      You know what that is, right?

            EDDIE
      No, what is it?

            JORDY
      Why don't you explain it, Bobby.
         (to a fireman joking a wall)
      Hey Camello!  You mind punching a hole
      in the floor?

            CAMELLO
      No problem.
         (to Eddie and Leon)
      Excuse me, gentlemen.  You might wanna
      back up a little more.  Don't wanna get
      your pants wet.

   Leon and Eddie move to higher ground - on top of a burnt TV
   set.  Eddie hands the brushed bracelet to Leon.  As Camello
   hacks at the floor with an ax, Jordy continues to examine the
   bodies and Korfin explains:

            KORFIN
      They have not soot in their mouths,
      which means they weren't breathin'
      before the fire and that usually means
      they were deceased - and this piece of
      cloth that my partner found means they
      were wrapped up in something, probably
      doused with a flammable liquid and
      positioned like this on the bed.  To the
      untrained eye, it looks like an
      accident.

   Jordy kicks around the draining floor, reaches down for
   something.

            LEON
      What's he looking for?

            EDDIE
      A timer.

   Jordy finds some wires attached to an outlet, pulls them up -
   on the other end is a timer.  Korfin takes the timer from
   Jordy and moves to Eddie.

            KORFIN
      Here you go.  A big double homicide.

   EXT. MILOS' APARTMENT BUILDING - NIGHT

   As Jordy and Korfin exit the brownstone, a CAMERA CREW is
   arriving.  Jumps out.
   Korfin and Jordy cross toward Korfin's car.  They open the
   trunk.  Take off their muddy boots throwing them in.

            KORFIN
      You see Eddie's face when I gave him the
      timer?  Wish I had a picture of it.

            JORDY
      He knew all along.

            KORFIN
      What??

            JORDY
      That's why he was so quiet.  He was
      testing us.

   Eddie and Leon exit - Eddie carrying a baggie with a timer
   inside.  NICOLETTE KARAS, young and attractive, pushes her
   microphone at Eddie.  She's smart, aggressive and respected
   by her peers.

            NICOLETTE
      Detective, does it look like a murder?

            EDDIE
      We don't know that yet.  It's much too
      early.  There's a lot to be done.

            NICOLETTE
      How many victims are up there?

            EDDIE
      There are two bodies found at this
      point.

            NICOLETTE
      Can we go up to the crime scene?

            EDDIE
      You know you can't do that.  C'mon.

            NICOLETTE
      Is it drug related?

            EDDIE
      We don't know.  When I have more I'll
      let you know.

   Nicolette signals for her camera man, MIKE, to zoom in on
   Eddie's hand.  She barrels on...

            NICOLETTE
      Detective...what's that you're holding
      in your hand?  Evidence?

   Mike pans up to Eddie's face.  Other reporters arrive,
   hurling questions which Eddie easily answers.  Cameras flash
   as we PAN BACK TO Korfin and Jordy.  Jordy is about to get in
   the car as he notices, back behind some construction - DAPHNE
   HANDLOVA.  She's still wearing the crumpled summer dress.
   She tentatively steps out to signal Jordy.  He only catches a
   glimpse of her.  He starts toward her -- knifes through the
   crowd - but Daphne is gone.

            KORFIN
      What?

            JORDY
      There was a woman - I think she wanted
      to talk to us.  She looked scared.  Oh
      shit!  Oh no!

   EXT. CENTRAL PARK - LATER

   Korfin's car SCREECHES to a stop.  Jordy leaps out.
   Suddenly, Jordy stops...the Mugger handcuffed to the tree is
   now NAKED!

            MUGGER
      You motherfuckin' bastard!  She stripped
      me!  It was a bag lady!  She touched me
      all over, it was disgusting.

   Jordy unlocks the handcuffs.

            JORDY
      I'm sorry.  I'm really sorry.

   Korfin delivers a blanket.  Jordy covers him.

            JORDY (CONT'D)
      You okay?

            MUGGER
      A dog pissed on me!!  I'm gonna sue you
      for this!  You violated my civil rights!

            JORDY
      Your civil rights?!  You tried to rob
      me!  I could arrest you right now!
      You're lucky you're walking away from
      this.  Now get outta here.

   Jordy gives him a push.  The Mugger wraps the blanket around
   himself cursing - hurrying away.
      

   EXT. 8TH AVENUE - NIGHT

   Exhausted HOOKERS who have worked all night loiter outside a
   sleazy hotel.  CAMERA PANS up to a blinking hotel sign.

   INT. KING EDWARD HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT

   The light is blinking an eerie green and yellow light into
   the room.  Emil is at the window pulling the blind down
   trying to shut out the blinking light.  He pulls it down
   twice and it pops back up both times.  The third time he
   angrily pulls it so hard, it comes off the window completely.
   He sits down in a chair in frustration - adjusting a pillow
   behind his back.  THE ROSEANNE SHOW is on TV.  Roseanne has
   been talking to a FATHER.

            ROSEANNE (ON T.V.)
      So you slept with your son's wife!
      What's that all about?

            FATHER (ON T.V.)
      I take full responsibility for sleepin'
      with my daughter in law.  I had low self
      esteem, I thought I had to compete with
      him.

   Emil reaches for his dictionary.

            EMIL
         (mutters)
      Self-esteem?  Self-esteem??

   He flips through his dictionary to find the meaning of self
   esteem.

            FATHER (ON T.V.)
      Losin' my job and everything, caused my
      behavioral disorder.
         (turns to his son)
      Forgive me, Kirk.  Let me hug you?

   The audience boos.  Roseanne mediates...

   Oleg - fresh from the shower with wet hair - sits on the bed
   in his skivvies - staring into the videocamera's LCD screen -
   rewinding Milos' murder.  We see it now for the first time -
   as he rewinds it.  Oleg watches - a bottle of cheap vodka
   between his legs.  Emil, looks up from his dictionary.  He's
   wearing Milos' Rolex.
   Tamina's jewelry - her brushed gold necklace and pearl
   earrings - are in front of him with Daphne's wallet.  Emil
   looks up - Oleg is holding his videocamera.

            EMIL
         (Czech)
      Turn that fucking thing off!

            OLEG
         (Czech)
      I'm not filming.  I'm watching Milos
      die.  It's just like a move but realer.

   Emil grabs the videocamera.
         (Czech)
      Don't break it!  Don't break it!

            EMIL
      Speak English!

            OLEG
         (English)
      You said speak Czech!

            EMIL
      How you erase this?

            OLEG
      I'll do it.  Don't hurt my camera!

   Emil tosses the camera back to Oleg who drops his vodka
   bottle in order to catch the camera.  Oleg, holding the
   camera like it's gold, goes to the dresser and puts it away.
   Emil starts to go through Daphne's wallet.

            EMIL
      Stupid, Milos.  I didn't want to kill
      him.
         (noticing)
      What's this?

   Emil found the last card in the wallet.  It's pink with a
   picture of a busty globe.  Printed in the middle is - WORLDLY
   ESCORTS - and a number.

            EMIL (CONT'D)
      Worldly escorts?

   Emil picks up his dictionary and begins to flip the pages -
   finding the meaning of worldly.  He gets up and dials the
   number.  A soft, SEXY VOICE answers.  Soft music in the
   background.

            SEXY VOICE
      Hi?

            EMIL
      Hello?

            SEXY VOICE
      Are you looking for companionship?

   Oleg, who's listening, moves to Emil.

            OLEG
      Whore?

            EMIL
      I'm homesick.  You have Eastern European
      girl?  A Czech girl?

            SEXY VOICE
      Matter of fact, I have a lovely Czech
      girl.

            EMIL
      I take her.  Send her!

   EXT. FIRE STATION 91 - NIGHT

   Korfin's car pulls up to the station - as a fire engine is
   returning.

            JORDY
      Now that you know him, maybe you can get
      extra work in the next movie they make
      about him.

            KORFIN
      Yeah?

            JORDY
      Maybe you can be his stand-in.

   INT. FIRE STATION 91 - NIGHT

   The men are pulling off their equipment - coming down from
   the high of fighting a fire.  Korfin and Jordy walk toward
   the TV room.  The TV is on in the background.  We can see
   Nicolette interviewing Eddie.  He holds up the paint can.

            CHIEF DUFFY (O.S.)
      What the hell is that??  You gave Eddie
      Flemming the evidence?!

   They turn.  DEPUTY CHIEF FIRE MARSHAL DECLAN DUFFY - the head
   of the arson squad - comes over.  Duffy's tough, Irish and
   very political.

            DUFFY
         (pointing to the TV)
      Who did cause and origin?

            JORDY
      Who do you think, Chief?!

            DUFFY
      Then why didn't you talk to the
      reporter?

            JORDY
      'Cause we got more important things to
      do, like finding out who did it.

   They walk to the back of the station and start up the stairs.

            DUFFY
      Don't you guys understand?  It's all
      about image.  The better we look the
      more money I get to pay you guys
      overtime.

            KORFIN
      Yeah, right.

            DUFFY
      What was that, Korfin?

            KORFIN
      I said, yeah, you're right, Chief.  As
      soon as we get somethin' we'll let you
      alert the media.

            DUFFY
      You do that, wiseguy.  Now let's solve
      this thing before Eddie Flemming does.

   They all head upstairs.

   INT. ARSON SQUAD ROOM - DAY

   The Chief, Jordy and Korfin enter.  There are posters of
   pyros, arsonists and terrorists on the walls.  GARCIA - a
   Puerto Rican investigator - looks up from his desk.

            GARCIA
      Hey guys, I got your torch.  He just
      gave a full confession.

   A scruffy, unshaven white man sitting across from Garcia,
   turns.  He is MAX, a pyromaniac in his 40's with a freshly
   scratched cross etched in his forehead.  He craves attention.

            MAX
      It's my fire!  Screw homicide.  I'll
      tell you guys everything!

   Jordy moves to his desk with Korfin.  They sit across from
   each other.  Duffy keeps going to his office, not even
   bothering to stop.

            JORDY
      What's that on your forehead, Max?
      That's a nice attention getter.

            MAX
      Yeah, I'm religious.  I'm not an Atheist
      like you!  Now, are you guys gonna
      arrest me, or not?

            JORDY
      How did you start the fire this time?

            MAX
      I used an accelerant.

            JORDY
      Yeah?  What kind?

            MAX
         (to Jordy)
      Hey, by the way, I'm really sorry about
      your wife leavin' you.

            KORFIN
      Max.

            MAX
         (continuing)
      ...Yeah, and with your old man dying
      last year you - what's it?  Just you and
      the dog now?

            KORFIN
      Max! 

            MAX
      Does it feel bad - I mean the new guy
      your ex-wife's seeing - I hear he's a
      big shot downtown.

   Jordy pops out of his seat.

            JORDY
      That's it!  You're outta here.

   Jordy pulls Max by the collar - pushes him down the aisle.

            MAX
      That's it.  I'm suing.

            KORFIN
      Get in line.

   Korfin takes over - throwing him out.  Jordy turns to Garcia
   who is laughing.

            JORDY
      What's so funny.  How does he know so
      much about me?  Who tells him my life
      story?

            GARCIA
      He hangs around downstairs.  The guys
      talk to him.  He's a joke...

            JORDY
      He's no joke!  One day he's gonna
      graduate from trash can fires and do
      something big.

            GARCIA
      Okay.  Okay.  We'll ban him from the
      station.

   INT. KING EDWARD HOTEL ROOM - TV SET - NIGHT

   As the "Top Story" logo is splashed across the screen,
   accompanied by a catchy TV THEME, Robert Hawkins introduces
   America's highest rated 'news magazine' show.

            ROBERT HAWKINS
      Good evening, I'm Robert Hawkins and
      this is Top Story.  Tonight we bring you
      an exclusive interview with Stephen
      Geller - who horrified the nation two
      years ago when he went berserk and
      murdered three clerks in a Manhattan
      shoe store.  But now, Mr. Geller's
      claim, spoken softly and articulately,
      is that he is the victim.  According to
      Mr. Geller, the events of that fateful
      day were not his fault but were the
      fault of his psychiatrist.  Hard to
      believe...watch.

            EMIL (O.S.)
      Louder.

   VIDEOCAMERA SLOWLY ZOOMS OUT and PANS over to Emil, sitting
   on the hotel bed watching the TV.  He looks at us.

            EMIL (CONT'D)
      Louder.

   Oleg's hand reaches in front of the lens - turning up the
   volume.  The scene cuts back to Stephen Geller being
   interviewed by Robert Hawkins and his camera crew.  He's
   sitting on the front lawn of a mental institution in a paint
   stained shirt.  A showing of his artwork is displayed in the
   background.  Patients peruse the paintings of weird
   dysfunctional faces that avoid eye contact.  One of the
   paintings depicts Eddie Flemming and Leon Jackson.

            STEPHEN GELLER
      This had nothing to do with shoes that
      didn't fit or my relationship with my
      father who, as you know, made a fortune
      selling penny loafers in the fifties.
      These people died because of the
      criminal actions of my doctor.

            ROBERT HAWKINS
      Your doctor?

            STEPHEN GELLER
      Yes.  My psychiatrist didn't insist that
      I stay on my medication.

            ROBERT HAWKINS
      ...so you feel absolutely no
      responsibility for killing these people?

            STEPHEN GELLER
      It was my finger that pulled the
      trigger, but I'm not morally
      responsible.  My psychiatrist knew what
      I was capable of.  How could I know.
      I'm not a doctor.

            ROBERT HAWKINS
      You seem very savvy for a man who's been
      found mentally incompetent to stand
      trial.

            STEPHEN GELLER
      Look, I'm a victim here, too.  I was a
      year away from getting my masters in
      Art, now I'll never graduate.  My life
      has been permanently disrupted.

            ROBERT HAWKINS
      Permanently disrupted?  Aren't you
      selling paintings now for quite a lot of
      money?  Hasn't this 'incident' as you
      call it, jump started your career as an
      artist?

            STEPHEN GELLER
      Look, I'm in here.  You call this a
      career move?

            ROBERT HAWKINS
      And isn't there a movie in the works
      about you?

            STEPHEN GELLER
      We're in negotiations, that's correct.

            ROBERT HAWKINS
      But doesn't the Son of Sam Law prevent
      criminals from profiting from their
      crimes?

            STEPHEN GELLER
      That doesn't apply to me because I'm not
      a criminal.  I'm not a criminal!  I
      wasn't convicted.

   Emil leans forward - listening.  Fascinated.

            EMIL
      I love America.  No one is responsible
      for what they do.

   There's a KNOCK on the door.  Our VIDEOCAMERA POV swings over
   to it.  Then WHIPS back to Emil.  Emil looks at us.

            EMIL (CONT'D)
      Get in the bathroom!

            OLEG (O.S.)
      Whatever we do - we fuck her, right?

            EMIL
      Oleg, get in bathroom, stay there and
      shut up!

   Emil turns off the TV.  Our POV backs into the bathroom,
   closing the door but leaving it open a crack.  Emil looks
   down at his shoe.  The POV PANS down to the kitchen knife
   sticking out of Emil's BOOT.  Emil's hands pull his pants
   cuff over it.  POV PANS up to Emil as he moves to the door
   and opens it.  It's not Daphne and she's not world class.

            HONEY
      Hi, I'm Honey.

            EMIL
      Where's Czech girl?

            HONEY
      Baby, I'm anybody you want me to be.
      I'm a little schoolgirl, I'm mommy, I'm
      a Czech girl.

   She enters.  Closes the door behind her.

            HONEY (CONT'D)
      Now I like to get business out of the
      way before we get down to pleasure.  Why
      don'tchya put my money on the dresser.

            EMIL
      I ordered a Czech girl.  Daphne, you
      know her?

   Oleg ZOOMS in for a CLOSE UP of Honey.  During the rest of
   the scene Oleg films her.  Honey begins to undress.

            HONEY
      It's an outcall service run out of an
      apartment.  I don't meet the other
      girls.  Aren't you gonna get undressed?

            EMIL
      Where is escort service?

            HONEY
      That's confidential.  Could you put the
      money on the dresser?

            EMIL
      I like to talk to the person who runs
      the service.  Can you give me address?

            HONEY
      Look.  Do we have a problem here?
      There's no reason to have a problem.
      I'm gonna make you feel real good.  You
      wanna Czech girl?
      After I'm done with you, you won't miss
      her.  Now why don't you pay me?

   She starts to unfasten Emil's belt.

            EMIL
         (stopping her)
      Listen to me.  I don't want sex.  Just
      give me the address and then you go.

            HONEY
         (suddenly hard as nails)
      Look, man, I don't give a shit if you
      want sex or not, but you're payin' for
      my time.

   Emil pulls the knife out of his boot and SHOVES her against
   the door, PUSHING the blade against her throat - suddenly
   furious like he was before killing Milos and Tamina.

            EMIL
      Give me the address!!

            HONEY
      Alright, alright - don't hurt me!
      Please, it's in my book, in my purse!

   Emil backs off as she reaches for her purse, and comes out
   with a can of mace, SPRAYING Emil's face!

   Emil stumbles backwards - Oleg holding him in the frame.  He
   WHIP PANS back to Honey as she grabs her clothes, unlocking
   the door but Emil's HAND SLAMS it shut!  Emil turns blindly,
   rubbing his burning eyes - guarding the door.  Honey darts
   toward the bathroom - she pushes open the door and runs into
   Oleg who is VIDEOTAPING HER.  Horrified, she turns around as
   Emil SMASHES her in the face so hard she topples backwards,
   tripping into the bathtub, pulling the shower curtain down on
   her!  Like a panther out for the kill, Emil POUNCES.  Oleg
   films as Emil lifts his hand, gripping...

   THE KITCHEN KNIFE

   As Emil's hand comes FLYING DOWN - then RISES UP, BLOODIED.
   Her screams are muffled by the shower curtain wrapped around
   her face.  Oleg films the scene as the knife plunges DOWN
   INTO:
      
      INT. FIRE STATION 91 - ARSON SQUAD ROOM - NIGHT

   DAPHNE, a sketch of her face.

            JORDY (O.S.)
      Her lips are fuller than that.  You can
      see 'em a mile away.

   WIDER

   Food containers are scattered all over the place.  The female
   COMPOSITE ARTIST looks at Jordy.  Stacks of failed sketches
   sit beside her.

            COMPOSITE ARTIST
      What about her cheek bones?

            JORDY
      Her cheek bones are prominent and her
      eyes were huge.  Big, blue eyes and when
      I saw her, she looked scared.  Like she
      was looking to get away.  But she was
      absolutely beautiful.

   The composite artist looks at Jordy.

            JORDY (CONT'D)
      I gotta good look at her.

   Korfin has his chair turned around from his desk and is
   watching the sketch evolve as he speaks on the phone to the
   landlord of the 7th Street brownstone.  Garcia is also on the
   phone.  The other investigators are gone.  Working late into
   the night.  Everybody's exhausted.  It's almost dawn.

            KORFIN
      -- From Czechoslovakia?  And how long
      have they been livin' in your building? 
         (writes 4 YEARS on his pad)
      Alright, I'll be in touch when we know
      somethin'.
         (to Jordy)
      Milos and Tamina Karlova.  They were
      quiet and kept to themselves.  Landlord
      don't know who your girl is.

            JORDY
      How long they been livin' here?

            KORFIN
      You hear that question, Garcia?

            GARCIA
      Yeah, I got Immigration on the phone -
      they've been here illegally.

            KORFIN
      Well, they're definitely permanent
      residents now.

            GARCIA
      I got the owner of the plumbing company
      Milos worked for.

            KORFIN
      Why don't we get some sleep and we'll go
      see him in the morning.

            JORDY
      You go home.  I'm takin' your car and
      goin' back to the crime scene.

            KORFIN
      Aren't you tired?

            JORDY
      If I go home I won't be able to fall
      asleep anyway.

   Jordy takes the sketch of Daphne which isn't a bad likeness
   and heads for the door.  Korfin falls in behind him.  As they
   pass Garcia he hands Jordy the address.

            KORFIN
         (of the picture)
      She keepin' you up?  Like to meet her,
      huh?  She'd make you forget your ex
      wife.  Cure your insomnia.

   INT. MILOS' APARTMENT - DAWN

   CAMERA DESCENDS FROM THE SKY picking up Jordy as he enters
   what is left of Milos and Tamina's apartment.  The roof has
   been burned off. He moves into the next room, trying to see
   through the darkness - looking through the muck and char.

            EDDIE
      Okay to smoke?

   Jordy turns, surprised.  Eddie sits on a singed chair.  He
   pours from a half-pint bottle of vodka into his 'won ton
   soup' container, smoking a cigar.  On the arm of the armchair
   is a brown legal folder and stacks of photographs of the
   crime scene and the burned bodies.

            JORDY
      It's your crime scene now.  You can do
      what you want.

            EDDIE
      Watch the news?

            JORDY
      Nah, I musta missed it.

            EDDIE
      Well, just so you know.  I gave you guys
      the credit.

            JORDY
      Well, just so you know, I don't care
      about that stuff.

            EDDIE
      Nah, why should you?

            JORDY
      I don't even watch TV.

            EDDIE
      Good.  Good.  Commendable.

   Eddie knocks his 'won ton soup' back.

            JORDY
      Did you get a report from the M.E.?

            EDDIE
      Sure.  But I would like to ask you
      something.  You got a problem with me?

            JORDY
      If you found me steppin' on your crime
      scene - it might piss you off, too.
         (then)
      What about the report?

            EDDIE
      You were right, they were both dead
      before the fire.  The male was stabbed
      so hard the killer broke off the tip of
      the knife in his spine.  That's usually
      an indicator of something personal.

   Jordy pulls out a sketch of Daphne.  Hands it to Eddie.

            JORDY
      The Super said he'd seen her before but
      she didn't live here.

            EDDIE
      Pretty.

            JORDY
         (acts as if he didn't notice)
      Hmmmm.

            EDDIE
      Maybe you don't care about that either.
         (beat)
      Prettiest suspect I've had in awhile.

            JORDY
      Who says she's a suspect?

   Jordy tries to take the sketch back.  Eddie holds on.

            EDDIE
      What would you call her?

            JORDY
      Look, I'm not even sure she has anything
      to do with this.  I saw her outside
      after the fire - thought it was a lead.
      Maybe she saw something.  Maybe she was
      visiting somebody here.  Who knows?

   Eddie walks up to the burnt mattress - where the bodies were.

            EDDIE
      Obviously they weren't having sex.  As
      you pointed out.  So why go through all
      the trouble of putting 'em like that?

   Eddie passes a crime scene photo of the bodies to Jordy.

            JORDY
      Maybe it's a ritual thing or someone
      trying to send a message.  Burial rites
      are taken very seriously in Eastern
      Europe.  It could be to humiliate them.
      Just burning them up, no proper funeral,
      it's like condemning them to hell.

            EDDIE
      Eastern Europe.  Like what?  Romania?
      Hungary?

            JORDY
      Or Czechoslovakia.  The Slavs have been
      fighting the Germans and the Russians
      for a thousand years.  These are very
      intense people and they take things
      personally.

   Eddie's cellular rings - he grabs it.

            EDDIE
      Yeah?  Where?  You sure it was a knife?
      Uh-huh.  Really?  Okay.
         (to Jordy)
      We've got another murder - in a hotel on
      Eighth Avenue.  A stabbing.  Clerk said
      the room was rented by a Russian...

   Eddie's moving with Daphne's sketch.

            JORDY
      I'll come with you.

            EDDIE
      There wasn't a fire.  There'll be
      nothing for you to do.

            JORDY
      I can watch you, Eddie.  Maybe I'll
      learn something.

            EDDIE
      This isn't homicide school.

            JORDY
      My parents are from Poland.  I can help
      with the Eastern European angle.

            EDDIE
      You're Polish?

            JORDY
      My folks are.

            EDDIE
      Stay here.
                  

   EXT. TIMES SQUARE - NEWS STAND - DAY

   Video POV of the news stand as a hand reaches into frame and
   picks up a copy of THE NEW YORK POST.  Eddie's photo is on
   the front page - holding the kitchen timer by the wires.
   Underneath his picture the caption reads, "DOUBLE HOMICIDE...
   FLEMMING'S ON IT."  The videocamera widens out revealing Emil
   standing in front of a Times Square news stand, reading the
   front page.  The videocamera turns around - until focusing on
   Oleg himself.

            OLEG
      This is second day in America.  First
      day was very exciting.  Full of thrills
      and chills.  Over there, is co-star of
      my new movie, Emil!

   He turns the camera around - FILMING EMIL.

            EMIL
         (to vendor)
      Who is he?

            VENDOR
      New York's finest.  This is his case.

   The VENDOR - picks up People.  Stephen Geller is on the
   cover.

            VENDOR (CONT'D)
      This all you want? 

            EMIL
      Do you know how much killer gets for
      movie rights?

            VENDOR
         (People)
      In here, says he wants a million.

            EMIL
      Million?!  The killer gets one million
      dollars for a television interview?

            VENDOR
      Hey, tabloids paid Ted Bundy - famous
      serial killer - half a million for his
      interview.  And how much you think
      Monica got for writing book about the
      President coming on to her?  It pays to
      be a killer or a whore in this country.
      Look, you want magazine or not?

            EMIL
      Yes.  Both.

            OLEG
      And these.

   Oleg picks up FILM COMMENT, MOVIELINE and PREMIERE magazine.
   Emil pays for everything.

            EMIL
         (to Oleg)
      Get a taxi.

   Oleg tucks the magazines in his coat, picks up the suitcases
   and hails a taxi.  As Emil collects his change he sees an old
   BLIND WOMAN waiting at the crosswalk.  The light's blinking
   WALK.

            EMIL (CONT'D)
      Let me help.

   Emil gently takes her arm and crosses her to the other side.

            BLIND WOMAN
      Thank you, son.

   Emil watches her walk on.

   INT. KING EDWARD HOTEL ROOM - DAY

   The hotel room is a hive of activity.  GIL is dusting the
   dresser for prints.  Another officer is stripping the bed and
   putting the bedding into a big, clear plastic bag.  As Eddie
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