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Titre: Inner thought
Posté par: OUIJDANE le 23 Décembre 2024 à 10:26:46

It was 8 p.m., and Ouijdane’s mind raced as she sat in her dimly lit room. Depression had gripped her life for months, making each day a battle. Yet tonight, a spark of determination to learn and grow stirred within her.

“Slip past the despair,” she whispered, opening her laptop to start an online class. The first module encouraged her to “look carefully” at her thoughts and recognize her inner critic. Ouijdane wrote down every negative thought she had, determined to face them.

Her journey was like a “mad doh” rush—chaotic and uncertain. The lessons reminded her of her childhood curiosity, a time when she would often ask, “What time?” eager to learn. But now, her questions were deeper, tied to her purpose.

Each lesson was a challenge. As a “big girl” now, she felt the weight of her struggles on her “hip bone.” The hardest part was maintaining consistency, often feeling exhausted by “bedtime.”

One evening, a “black goat” outside her window reminded her of a folktale about resilience. She smiled and wrote, “I slipped badly today, but tomorrow is another chance to stand.”

Progress wasn’t linear. Sometimes, she “lagged behind,” but small victories, like learning to “collect pennies” of joy, fueled her. She recalled lessons about regret and redemption, “They robbed cars in their youth,” reminding her it was never too late to change.

One day, Ouijdane looked at herself in the mirror and said, “I’m here.” Showing up for herself was the most courageous act she could perform. Her online community supported her, with replies like “She is home, learning and healing.”

“They work,” she thought, reading stories of others overcoming challenges. “If they can work through their pain, so can I.” Slowly, Ouijdane learned to manage her emotions, whispering, “We shall see where this journey takes me.”

Months later, her best friend visited, saying, “Fix this,” pointing to her overgrown garden. They worked together, turning the space into a thriving sanctuary.

Each day became a step forward. She reflected critically—“Think you,” challenging her inner beliefs. On weekends, she found joy in simple pleasures like watching cricket matches. Her journey wasn’t just about survival; it was about rediscovering life.

“Nice time,” she wrote one evening, looking at her “long skirt” flowing in the wind. She had learned to embrace uncertainty, saying, “Perhaps not everything will be perfect, but that’s okay.”

Ouijdane still had hard days. “Help me,” she’d ask, and those around her would remind her of her strength. Each time she faltered, she’d tell herself, “Change one thought, one habit, one moment at a time.”

Now, Ouijdane stood tall, like the “tall three” oak trees in her backyard. The echoes of her “loud cry” of despair had transformed into a song of hope. As she closed her journal, marking “Page twenty” of her new chapter, Ouijdane knew she wasn’t just learning to live; she was learning to thrive.

Titre: Re : Inner thought
Posté par: Basic le 23 Décembre 2024 à 11:43:20

Désolé Ouidjane, même si il y a une section pour les textes exprimés dans une autre langue, le forum est un lieu d'entraide littéraire francophone. Donc, la grande majorité des usagers de ce forum ne peuvent pas te comprendre.
Peux-tu poster ta présentation en français.

Pour la modération

Basic

Titre: Re : Inner thought
Posté par: Cendres le 24 Décembre 2024 à 09:10:59

Texte de OUIJDANE 

Désolé, vous n'êtes pas autorisé à afficher le contenu du spoiler.

You are wrong, here it is not to put texts, it is in this place:

https://monde-ecriture.com/forum/index.php?board=6.0

Otherwise it is a forum for writings in French especially.

Here is the "presentation" part. It is made to introduce yourself and not to deposit your texts

Titre: Re : Inner thought
Posté par: Rémi le 24 Décembre 2024 à 15:02:57

Merci Cendres :)